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poem: Ur Death Is All I Need
« Thread Started on Feb 18, 2007, 3:37am »

this is my 1st poem so plzzzzz b kind :-/

UR DEATH IS ALL I NEED --------------

Sleeping under the earth peacefully
My soul is awakend by the sound of u crying feebly
Crying over my grave i see ur beautiful face after years
Down ur fair rosy cheeks fall those precious tears
I look at my arm and ur name is still there cut in
Since i had run my pocket knife through my skin

So much i tried but we always remained just friends
I looked like no one when u were surrounded by those gorgeous men
And when u married him i had no one left
depressed and lonely too , ull never know how i felt
sleepless nights , horrible thoughts , matters were getting worst
I didnt think i would ever be free from this evil curse
I had no option , killing myself was all i could do
Guess i just had to pay the cost of loving u

Now ur crying over my dead body guess u found out he's fake
How couldnt u see, how could u make such a big mistake
Glad ur here now , glad u can finally see
The one u had been looking for could have been me
Life is all tht is left now to accomplish my love so deep
for u to be mine , ur death is all i need

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Re: poem: Ur Death Is All I Need
« Reply #1 on Mar 8, 2007, 5:55pm »

Really good and patient one ... but good

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